the comic is really good, and I can see you're really trying however "fail" would be better translated as "échec" in this instance since "échouer" is a verb and here it's be more a noun, "échouer" on it's own is just not french I hope you don't take this wrong, I just thought you'd like to know this ^^
EEEEEE Yesssss, I have been wanting this. Le Mime is so cute. It's cute/sweet/a little sad that Jack just assumes that the flowers are his daddy being all romantic and sweet/doesn't even think that the flowers could be for him
YES INDEED I DO THANK YOU VERY MUCH AND I HAVE BEEN QUITE LOOKING FORWARD TO IT JEEZ. Lol, jk. This makes up for the wait because POOR LE MIME! D: I do like the panel where his hat's just chillin' above his head though.